Friday, 20 November 2015

W.A.L.T. write similes to make our writing vivid and exciting.

We lit a a whole lot of fireworks it was like a party. By Tarelle.


The Roman Candles exploded like a bomb. By Roxci


A banger exploded like a lightning bolt.  By Marama.


One firework exploded and twirled, it was smokey and it squiggled like a snake. By Ocean-Lee.


A skyrocket went shootingup in the sky BANG, BOOM!  it shot up like lightning. By Maia

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