Room two Kaikohe West School
Friday, 20 November 2015
W.A.L.T. write similes to make our writing vivid and exciting.
We lit a a whole lot of fireworks it was like a party. By Tarelle.
The Roman Candles exploded like a bomb. By Roxci
A banger exploded like a lightning bolt. By Marama.
One firework exploded and twirled, it was smokey and it squiggled like a snake. By Ocean-Lee.
A skyrocket went shootingup in the sky BANG, BOOM! it shot up like lightning. By Maia
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